It's All in the Mind *... Stuff*

[Hyper Kinetic]

So i have marked down the results of the previous choice, number six, as the Tau were aiming toward the city with longer weapons. However...
I haven't got the time between now and me going away for placement for a month+ (leaving in ~24 hours) to write a new section & choice as well as do the other things i have to do around here. So, in its stead, i am going to ask the stuff that i considered asking before. Basically, i am asking for general feedback.

- How do you think the writing is? Should there be longer/shorter passages? Anything you particularly like or dislike about the writing style in general?
- What do you think about the posting of polls for choices? Too cluttering, or does it work?
- How about the story itself? I have been thinking of cutting it but... meh. I am happy enough to continue with it if people continue to vote.
- Anything further that you would like to add? Comments? Critiques?

I will check back on this when i get the chance, though probably not until i get back in early June...
Actually, i probably will have a whole host of fluff/short stories to post up then because i have a few bubbling around in my mind and should have enough time off/focus to get them out... so... yay?

[Enigma]

You really shouldn't tell us what would have happened if we vote for something.

[eetdestroyer]

i think it's all going rather swimmingly

the passages are good, the polls are as good an option as you can get, and the story is sounding cool

[Biowraith]

The fact that the passges are long, and the charrictars are convicingly good, can only be good things.

[UnseenOne]

looking foward for more

[Hyper Kinetic]

Woo! Back from placement now... straight into exam week
Anyhew, It's All in the Mind will be on hiatus for another week or two until some things around here get sorted out (my exams and room mainly, as well as more).

Thanx for the input people.
enigma
Yeah, i was kinda worried about that to begin with but i decided to roll with it and then ask about what people liked later on. I figured that i would give you the options that i was thinking of and allowing you to glimpse the strands of potential future, but it appeared a little awkward in my posts. It also allows for something vaguely similar to the Choose-Your-Own Adventure books, where you are so easily allowed to cheat and look forward to the future events of the decisions made (but, again, this is awkward and ruins much of the fun of them). So all future ones will not show the potential futures when the poll has ended.

Also, for those who may be interested, i will be setting up a new fluffy thread in the "Other GW threads" area because I have more writing coming (hooray for rekindling the flame that was my love for writing: regardless of how it turns out in writing, the images and events in my head are finally seeing some light ;D), though nothing that really could be considered roleplay outside of my own head. So check there soon and semi-regularly for updates on that front too!