Insight on Neophite list

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Trying to make a nephite list, How would you go about it and how would you improve, the idea is swamn with neophites and use a bit of tyranid artilhery with good survivar via dermal symbioses and malanthrope




++ Battalion Detachment +5CP (Tyranids - Genestealer Cults) [27 PL, 499pts] ++
+ HQ +
Jackal Alphus [4 PL, 70pts]
Primus [4 PL, 75pts]: Bonesword
+ Troops +
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
+ Elites +
Nexos [3 PL, 50pts]
++ Battalion Detachment +5CP (Tyranids - Genestealer Cults) [24 PL, 465pts] ++
+ HQ +
Jackal Alphus [4 PL, 70pts]
Magus [5 PL, 92pts]: Familiar
+ Troops +
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
Neophyte Hybrids [4 PL, 76pts]
+ Elites +
Kelermorph [3 PL, 75pts]
++ Battalion Detachment +5CP (Tyranids) [56 PL, 987pts] ++
+ HQ +
Malanthropes [5 PL, 120pts]
. Malanthrope
Neurothrope [4 PL, 90pts]
+ Troops +
Ripper Swarms [2 PL, 33pts]
Termagants [6 PL, 120pts]
. 10x Termagant (Devourer): 10x Devourer
. 10x Termagant (Fleshborer): 10x Fleshborer
Termagants [6 PL, 120pts]
+ Heavy Support +
Exocrine [11 PL, 155pts]
Exocrine [11 PL, 155pts]
Tyrannofex [11 PL, 194pts]: Rupture Cannon, Stinger Salvo
++ Total: [107 PL, 1,951pts] ++